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    learning to use new words.

    I Have Learnt New Vocabulary And Tried To Make Sentences Using Them.iam Sceptical About Whether The Usage Is Correct.could You Please Guide Me And Tell Me Which Is Incorrect?

    1.the Writer Has Endeavoured To dramatize The Story.
    2.i Wish That Such Happy Moments Are enduring .
    3.people Say Happy Moments Are fleeting Not Enduring.
    4.i Hope My Leg Pain subsides Shortly.
    5.i embraced Her When I Met Her After A Long Time.
    6.all My Classmates Are cheerful.
    7.if You Are inclined To Studying, You Will Secure Excellent Marks.
    8.he Ran At An Amazing pace.
    9.i Bought An elegant Vase.
    10.please Provide Me With precise Figures.
    11.his account Of Academic Performance Is Hardly Credible.
    12.a layman Finds It Difficult To Understand Technical Terms.
    13.i Am keen To Find Out Who Topped This Term.
    14.loads Of Homework impede A Student To Secure Good Grades.


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    Re: learning to use new words.

    Quote Originally Posted by samfat33 View Post
    I Have Learnt New Vocabulary And Tried To Make Sentences Using Them. I am Sceptical About Whether The Usage Is Correct. Could You Please Guide Me And Tell Me Which Is Incorrect?

    1. The Writer Has Endeavoured To dramatize The Story.
    2. I Wish That Such Happy Moments could be enduring .
    3. People Say Happy Moments Are fleeting, Not Enduring.
    4. I Hope My Leg Pain subsides Shortly. I hope the pain in my leg subsides shortly.
    5. I embraced Her When I Met Her After A Long Time.
    6. All My Classmates Are cheerful.
    7. If You Are inclined To study, You Will Secure Excellent Marks.
    8. He Ran At An Amazing pace.
    9. I Bought An elegant Vase.
    10. Please Provide Me With precise Figures.
    11. His account Of his Academic Performance Is Hardly Credible.
    12. A layman Finds It Difficult To Understand Technical Terms.
    13. I Am keen To Find Out Who was top/came top This Term.
    14. Loads Of Homework impede A Student from securing Good Grades.

    Your use of the words is fine - but see your other post for comment on capitalization.

    Also, always insert one space following any punctuation.


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    Re: learning to use new words.

    Quote Originally Posted by samfat33 View Post
    I Have Learnt New Vocabulary And Tried To Make Sentences Using Them.iam Sceptical About Whether The Usage Is Correct.could You Please Guide Me And Tell Me Which Is Incorrect?

    1.the Writer Has Endeavoured To dramatize The Story.
    2.i Wish That Such Happy Moments Are enduring .
    3.people Say Happy Moments Are fleeting Not Enduring.
    4.i Hope My Leg Pain subsides Shortly.
    5.i embraced Her When I Met Her After A Long Time.
    6.all My Classmates Are cheerful.
    7.if You Are inclined To Studying, You Will Secure Excellent Marks.
    8.he Ran At An Amazing pace.
    9.i Bought An elegant Vase.
    10.please Provide Me With precise Figures.
    11.his account Of Academic Performance Is Hardly Credible.
    12.a layman Finds It Difficult To Understand Technical Terms.
    13.i Am keen To Find Out Who Topped This Term.
    14.loads Of Homework impede A Student To Secure Good Grades.
    You must definitely review capitalization...there are mistakes in every sentence. You don't capitalize every word!

    All are correct [capitalization aside] except for:

    7.if You Are inclined To Studying, You Will Secure Excellent Marks.

    If you are inclined to study, you will secure excellent marks.

    11.his account Of Academic Performance Is Hardly Credible.

    His account of the academic performance is hardly credible.

    14.loads Of Homework impede A Student To Secure Good Grades.

    Loads of homework impedes a student's ability to secure good grades.

    Loads of homework acts as an uncountable noun.

    Again, improve those capitals....they look ugly!!!!

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