"With this design are associated the following quantities: ..."
This word order seems clumsy to me, and unless the author aimed to stress something by this (can't find what it could be!), it is not elegant. Am I right or am I wrong?
I would simply write,
"The following quantities are associated with this design: ..." OR
"With this design, the following quantities are associated: ..."
Moreover,I did note that you had written about the emphasis...but, in my opinion, the author [ I risk repeating myself] talks about a particular design, and not a common or any other one but this design
Last edited by Teia; 10-Oct-2007 at 21:05.
"With this design are associated the following quantities: quantity1, quantity2, etc..."