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    Smile She had been in a marriage,

    Life is not always that smooth for Rowling--one of the most widely-known writers in the 21st century. She had been in a marriage, but later divorced.


    Does the above passage sound right, especially the second sentence? Thanks.


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    Re: She had been in a marriage,

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    Life is not always that smooth for Rowling--one of the most widely-known writers in the 21st century. She had been in a marriage, but later divorced.


    Does the above passage sound right, especially the second sentence? Thanks.
    Uh-huh, A, it sounds fine. A wee bit of ellipsis but fine.


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    Re: She had been in a marriage,

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    Life is not always that smooth for Rowling--one of the most widely-known writers in the 21st century. She had been in a marriage, but later divorced.


    Does the above passage sound right, especially the second sentence? Thanks.
    Yep....sounds perfect to me...all of it.

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