I am writing an essay and I am not sure if I am writing correctly. I have underlined the sentence that could have mistakes. I would be grateful if you could correct me (if you find others mistakes that I have not underlined, I would be grateful as well! )
Thank you in advance
Lately, the rise of curiosity about celebrities’ private life [multiple celebrities = more than one life] has given birth to on-line gossip magazines that only deal with gossip to satisfy every readers’ [every reader's OR all readers'] interests. The so-called [Why are they "so-called"?] gossip magazines are mostly addressed to a feminine public, and they involve people of all ages. It is interesting to observe that women are attracted to celebrities’ private life since they are young [Who are young? The women of the celebrities?]and that they always want to be updated. This confirms the traditional conception that see the woman as the gossiper par excellence. It is essentially for this reason that on-line gossip magazines, most of which are the electronic reproductions of formed paper [printed periodicals] are so successful; in fact, besides being more complete than formed paper thanks to the photo galleries and video sections they include, they are “published” every day and they give the latest news.
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