Both sentences are correct.
Liberal approaches leading to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.
Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.
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The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
I would recommend the following: I am paraphrasing the above statement. Please let me know what corrections, if any, need to be made. Thank you.
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