Sodas aren't the only drinks going down kids throats. Sugary tea, coffee, and iced drinks are also being drunk instead of plain water. In the end, this can cause obsesity, tooth decay, and even affect brain development.
For a start, does iced drinks refer to drinks that have been put in the refrigerator for a while or drinks that contain ice in it? Or both?
Second, is it proper to replace In the end with As a result/Therefore/So?