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  1. #1
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    sentence

    Does that paragraph sound fine to you?

    - Ive learned throughout my life that nothing lasts forever. Both good and bad moments come to an end someday. That is why as time goes by, we get more mature and understand more about life.

    (There is sth there that sounds weird to me, but I wont say it so as not to influence anyone here. Thanks!)

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    It seems to me that it needs to conect these sentences more. They sound separated some how!

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    Re: sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by esl
    Does that paragraph sound fine to you?

    - Ive learned throughout my life that nothing lasts forever. Both good and bad moments come to an end someday. That is why as time goes by, we get more mature and understand more about life.

    (There is sth there that sounds weird to me, but I wont say it so as not to influence anyone here. Thanks!)
    Both good and bad moments will come to an end someday.

    As we mature, we gain a better understanding of/about life.

    :D

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