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    Smile Is the structure of this sentence correct?!!

    Is this sentence correct and does it has a meaning?


    Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people’s differences and vices regardless.

    Thanks in advance

    I.A

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    Re: Is the structure of this sentence correct?!!

    Any help!!!!

    I.A

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    Re: Is the structure of this sentence correct?!!

    You have a incongruent argument.

    "Unifies differences", Unifies vices".

    What you want, I believe, is:

    "Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people, regardless of their differences and vices."

    Herein you unify people, rather than the differences and vices they embrace.

    Wholeman

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    Smile Re: Is the structure of this sentence correct?!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Wholeman View Post
    You have a incongruent argument.

    "Unifies differences", Unifies vices".

    What you want, I believe, is:

    "Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people, regardless of their differences and vices."

    Herein you unify people, rather than the differences and vices they embrace.

    Wholeman
    I want to make sure if that my sentence has the meaning you provided in your suggestion.

    Thank you for your reply

    I.A

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