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    Where do the commas go in this sentence?

    An echocardiogram performed on 08/21/07 at StonyBrookHospital for posthemipneumonectomy had revealed no significant valvular leaks, a mild diastolic dysfunction, and a slightly reduced systolic function.


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    Re: Where do the commas go in this sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by erempa View Post
    An echocardiogram performed on 08/21/07 at StonyBrookHospital for posthemipneumonectomy had revealed no significant valvular leaks, a mild diastolic dysfunction, and a slightly reduced systolic function.

    An echocardiogram, performed on 08/21/07 at StonyBrook Hospital for posthemi-pneumonectomy, had revealed no significant valvular leaks, a mild diastolic dysfunction, and a slightly reduced systolic function.

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