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  1. Unregistered
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    shopping

    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentence.
    1. Wesley Mall is fantastic big. When you take a rest after a long shopping, you can watch a film or play roller coaster at the shopping mall.
    2. Wartmart is usually crowded during weekend OR weekend.
    Many thanks
    peter


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    #2

    Re: shopping

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentence.
    1. Wesley Mall is fantastic big. When you take a rest after a long shopping, you can watch a film or play roller coaster at the shopping mall.
    2. Wartmart is usually crowded during weekend OR weekend.
    Many thanks
    peter
    #1 adverb required, not adjective; "shopping for a long time".

    #2 "weekends" OR "a weekend".

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