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    • Join Date: Oct 2007
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    Resume's Objective Sentence

    Greetings to all,

    Please correct any grammatical mistake in the following objective sentence of my resume, (isn't the word "skills" repetitive?)


    Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical skills and customer service skills.





    sampahmel


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    Re: Resume's Objective Sentence

    inputs please ??


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    Re: Resume's Objective Sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by sampahmel View Post
    Greetings to all,

    Please correct any grammatical mistake in the following objective sentence of my resume, (isn't the word "skills" repetitive?)


    Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical skills and customer service skills.

    sampahmel
    Well you can omit one "skills" by

    Seeking Core IT I training to improve and develop computer related technical and customer service skills.

    What kind of job are you applying for? This doesn't sound like a job application Objective to me it is sounding like you are applying to an institution of learning...if that is the case the Objective sounds fine (without the extra "skills")

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