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    Is this sentence okay as is or should it be written a different way?

    His thyroid was drawn in September of 2007, which is normal.

    or In September of 2007, his thyroid was drawn, which is normal.

    Which way is better?

    Erin

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    Re: Is this sentence okay as is or should it be written a different way?

    Quote Originally Posted by erempa View Post
    His thyroid was drawn in September of 2007, which is normal.

    or In September of 2007, his thyroid was drawn, which is normal.

    Which way is better?

    Erin
    His thyroid was drawn in September of 2007 and was normal.
    You could revise the second sentence in a similar manner, but the above sentence flows better (in my opinion).
    Last edited by 2006; 09-Nov-2007 at 03:00.

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