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    • Join Date: Jan 2007
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    #1

    Smile My best try!

    Dear teacher,

    I tried to write a nice email to a prof. what do you think?

    Dear Prof.

    Thank you very much for the pleasant time I had yesterday meeting you both. I am really delighted and excited about teaching French, and I appreciate the time you spent showing me the classrooms. After seeing them I am very motivated because that is where I will be teaching French in a near future. Besides, I think the classrooms are very well equipped and modern; I am looking forward to using these advanced resources in my French classes.
    I also appreciate very much your willingness to share information about your research work and the conferences at AJTP Association and JIWS. I am very much interested and my husband too, we both will try to attend the conference this weekend.

    Sincerely,

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    #2

    Re: My best try!

    It's nice, though I see no need to give the reason for your being motivated and there should be a semi-colon after 'husband too'.


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    #3

    Re: My best try!

    Quote Originally Posted by yrmacita View Post
    Dear teacher,

    I tried to write a nice email to a prof. what do you think?

    Dear Prof.

    Thank you very much for the pleasant time I had yesterday meeting you both.
    How about beginning like this:
    "I would like to express my gratitude for the pleasant treatment I had received during the meeting yesterday."
    I am not a teacher.Just suggesting.

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