The essay is very good - just a few mistakes in grammar and expression. However, what you have written is primarily a 'travel talk', sharing your impressions and details of your holiday in Morocco. You have to focus on the important similarities and differences between the two countries.
You did address this at one point. Of course, every populated country has hotels; but you began to observe that hotels in Morocco are not geared to catering for tourists, whereas in France, they are very much so.
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