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  1. critelli
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    Cool sentence

    I need help with the following sentence.

    "The Class of 2008 will additionally receive a Presidential and Trustee Challenge making your modest gift even that more valuable.


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    Re: sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by critelli View Post
    I need help with the following sentence.

    "The Class of 2008 will additionally receive a Presidential and Trustee Challenge making your modest gift even that more valuable.
    "...Challenge, making your gift even more valuable"

    I would omit "modest" - which might not be taken well by the person that this is addressed to.

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