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    The brothers played on the flutes

    The brothers played on the flutes such sweet music that he audience was attracted by the sound.
    The brothers played such sweet music on the flutes that ...



    Which one of the above two sounds better to you? Thanks.

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    Re: The brothers played on the flutes

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    The brothers played on the flutes such sweet music that he audience was attracted by the sound.
    The brothers played such sweet music on the flutes that ...



    Which one of the above two sounds better to you? Thanks.
    The second one sounds better to me.

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    Re: The brothers played on the flutes

    Thanks, Flittle.

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