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    • Join Date: Nov 2007
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    #1

    Enquiry

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Grateful if you could advise whether the following sentence is grammatically correct:

    "To facilitate us further considering your proposal, I should be grateful if your company could provide the following information:....."

    Thank you in advance for your advice!

    Regards,
    Ily


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    #2

    Re: Enquiry

    Quote Originally Posted by Ily View Post
    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Grateful if you could advise whether the following sentence is grammatically correct:

    "To facilitate us further considering your proposal, I should be grateful if your company could provide the following information:....."

    Thank you in advance for your advice!

    Regards,
    Ily
    Welcome to the forums.

    It is grammatically ok, but rather ponderous. Perhaps "To assist us in our consideration of your proposal, I should be..." is easier to understand?

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