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    Could you check my resume, please?

    Belov Nickolay

    A dynamic, team-spirited and results oriented individual with growing professional experience and desire to move into consulting and investment banking. Possess an experience of securing family assets in Russian stock markets trade.

    Objective Summer Analyst
    Work Experience
    October 2006 – October 2007 Uralsib Bank, Intern, Financial Consultant
    Consulted Bank’s clients about credit products and asset management services. Providing all necessary information about opportunities and possibilities of investments into Russian financial markets.
    • Receiving documents
    • Organizing and working with the base of potential clients

    July 2006 –August 2006 Ilyich Abrasive Company, Intern
    Implementation of inventory project. Inventory program planning.
    • Preparation of a basic database (MsAcess)
    • Conducting trial version of inventory project

    July 2005 –August 2005 Germany, Frankfurt, Summer Children Camp, member of kitchen staff team
    • Food preparation, kitchen and canteen cleaning, washing up dishes

    June 2004 –August 2004 Retail in tourism
    Souvenirs selling
    September 2004 – June 2009 Saint-Petersburg State University, Faculty of Economics
    Specialty: Mathematical methods in Economics
    Research activities: State securities and their role in macroeconomics, Choice of enterprise funding sources, IPO influence to company value
    Scientific interests: Finance, stock markets, valuation of the company, financial statement analysis

    September 2007 Uralsib Bank, Credit and investment products teaching course

    Mai 2006 Agildea group,Project Risk and Quality Management Course

    Mai 2006 Agildea group, Project Management Fundamentals Course

    1994 – 2004 415 gymnasia with profound knowledge of foreign languages

    Computer skills MS Office (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Access), Eviews 4.0

    Languages • English fluent (Passed FCE University of Cambridge exam) preparing for CAE test
    • German basic level

    Personal Strength • Enterprising, industrious, responsible, communicative, persistent
    • Works well alone or a part of the team, capable in working in diverse working force
    • Detail oriented, flexible and adaptable
    • Willing to become professional
    • Having analytical skills, easily trainee

    Others • Driving license
    • Being a students group leader in the university

    HobbiesTheater, table tennis, volleyball, dancing, mountain skiing

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    Re: Could you check my resume, please?

    Your resume may work just fine, but my question is where will you be applying for jobs? I am an American and for use in America I would make several changes; for Europe probably okay.
    What changes for America?
    Focus more on action verbs in describing your work at Uralsib and Ilyich
    Get rid of the bullet points - just indent
    Save all of the "Personality" for your cover letter or for use in targeted
    resumes for companies that ask for that kind of information.

    I might try to expand your descriptions of the job duties and take out the summer jobs in Germany and souvenir selling.

    Some of the word usage raises questions for me.
    "Possess an experience of securing family assets in Russian stock markets trade."
    I might say
    Experienced in placing client asset advantageously in the Russian
    stock market.
    "family assets" sounds like you got money from your brother.

    Is "Summer Analyst" a regular job description? Is it the ONLY job you would accept?

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