Wel, I certainly have seen worse, but there is a lot of room for improvement.
One thing is that you try to put too much in your sentences. You need to say something, stop, then start another sentence where you say something else.
"Persepolis" is a book written from the point of view of Serapi as a child. She talks about what he childhood wa like in Iran. Serapi was born into a middle class family. Her father was an engineer.I do not have any suggestions for the rest of that paragraph, as I cannot figure out what you are trying to say.
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