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    Can you correct this sentence, please

    "I want to use the knowlegde and insight that Sociology will provide me, to bring about positive social change to the society where I live"

    "I and other Red Cross voloonteres interwied the refuges about the atrocites they have been through"

    Can you check and correct these sentences please.


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    Re: Can you correct this sentence, please

    Quote Originally Posted by Topplayer View Post
    "I want to use the knowledge and insight that Sociology will provide me to bring about positive social change to the society where I live"

    "I and other Red Cross voloonteres interwied volunteers interviewed the refuges refugees about the atrocites atrocities they have been through"

    Can you check and correct these sentences please.
    Welcome to the forums.

    Spelling not too good; grammar basically fine.

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    Re: Can you correct this sentence, please

    Quote Originally Posted by Topplayer View Post
    "I want to use the knowlegde and insight that Sociology will provide me, to bring about positive social change to the society where I live"

    "I and other Red Cross voloonteres interwied the refuges about the atrocites they have been through"

    Can you check and correct these sentences please.
    Topplayer,

    Welcome to the forum!

    Cheers,
    Amigos4

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