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    • Join Date: Dec 2007
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    #1

    Question Speech in a Seminar

    Hi, could any one please correct the following paragraph:

    Hi Everyone,
    I am going to present last week's events happened in my team.

    1. Last week our MD called me and questioned about the projects which i am currently handling. He mainly focussed on the XYZ Project. He asked me to prepare a Plan of Action for that project. I prepared a Plan of Action and discussed with him. He gave me few suggestions and asked me to send him the updated plans. I modified it and send him the updated document by mail on last thursday.

    2. The second main thing happened in our team was the progression of feedbacks in ABC project. Its really a hard feedback, but we successfully completed the feedbacks and delivered it on last Friday itself.

    Thats all about my team.
    Thanks


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    #2

    Re: Speech in a Seminar

    Hi Everyone, Good morning/afternoon, everyone,

    This is what happened in my section last week:

    1. Last week our MD called me and questioned me about the projects which I am currently handling. He mainly focussed on the XYZ Project. He asked me to prepare a Plan of Action for that project. I prepared a Plan of Action and discussed it with him. He gave me a few suggestions and asked me to send him the updated plan. I modified itand sent him the updated document by mail [??e-mail or post] last Thursday.

    2. The second main thing that happened in our team was the progression of feedbacks for the ABC project. It was hard to achieve, but we successfully completed the feedbacks and delivered them last Friday.

    There was nothing else of importance.


    • Join Date: Dec 2007
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    #3

    Re: Speech in a Seminar

    Thanks Anglika,

    Now I understood my mistakes.

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