thank for a present

[Nayrouz]

Hi Zeze

I'd like to say thanks alot for the lovely present ,I like it too much ,because it's the favorite type and shows your politenss .

If there are any mistakes correct it to me please

[David L.]

I'd like to say thanks alot for the lovely present ,I like it too much ,because it's the favorite type and shows your politenss .

If there are any mistakes correct it to me please

I'd like to say many thanks for the lovely present. I really like it as/because it's a favourite of mine, and shows your thoughtfulness.
or
I really like it - it's a favourite of mine - and shows your thoughtfulness.

If there are any mistakes, please correct them.