Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. angliholic's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • Taiwan
      • Current Location:
      • Taiwan

    • Join Date: Feb 2007
    • Posts: 2,988
    #1

    Smile Wang developed an early interest in music.

    Born May 17, 1976, in New York, Wang developed an early interest in music.


    Is it better to rewrite the bolded line as the following? Thanks.

    Wang developed an interest in music very early.


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
    • Posts: 19,434
    #2

    Re: Wang developed an early interest in music.

    Not necessarily better, but certainly alternative.

  2. angliholic's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • Taiwan
      • Current Location:
      • Taiwan

    • Join Date: Feb 2007
    • Posts: 2,988
    #3

    Re: Wang developed an early interest in music.

    Thanks, Anglika.

Similar Threads

  1. Will You Please Proof Read My Essay
    By V.HERNANDEZ in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 12-Nov-2007, 13:33
  2. Pls give me a hand. I needs some helps..
    By luciexoxo in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 27
    Last Post: 12-Nov-2007, 09:31
  3. IELTS WRITING TASK2 Music
    By dadimo in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 15-Jun-2007, 03:32
  4. maturita 5 - culture, art, entertainment
    By Lenka in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 02-Feb-2006, 07:14
  5. noun phrases
    By sting in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 26-Aug-2004, 21:52

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •