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    Post Two notices

    The following notices are very important for me to post for my customer. Do they sound ok? If not please make the corrections for me.

    Interact is out of order. Payment can be made by check or cash only. Sorry for the inconvenience.

    Scanner is temporarily out of order. Please go to the C.T. Centre next to this building. Thank you.


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    Re: Two notices

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    The following notices are very important for me to post for my customer. Do they sound ok? If not please make the corrections for me.

    Interact is out of order. Payment can be made by check or cash only. Sorry for the inconvenience.

    Scanner is temporarily out of order. Please go to the C.T. Centre next to this building. Thank you.
    Is "Interact" the name of a machine? Or is it a process. It will probably be better to omit the first sentence in #1 and go straight to "Payment....".

    The second one is ok, though I would put "The" in front of "scanner".

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