[Topic: Some people think that the use of computers should be restricted to reduce its harmful effect on children. Do you agree or disagree? Write a composition of 200 words giving your opinion on the topic.
Revised Answer:The use of computers should be restricted to reduce its harmful effect on children.Firstly, computers can make children neglect their studies. Children can spend so many hours on computer games that they have no time left for their study. Even in class, they may not pay attention to the lesson but think about games, for example, how to kill the boss or how to go up a level.Secondly, using a computer too much surely does harm to children’s health. Computers do nothing to protect the eyes. If children look at them for too long, their eyes are harmed. Moreover, muscles are weakened when children sit still using a computer. Being absorbed, they also often stay up late, which affects their growth.Finally, computers may affect children’s character. When being asked to study while playing his favorite game, a child may lie that he has done his homework so he may continue playing. If connected to the Internet it may bring images of sex and violence leading children to have bad thoughts.In conclusion, restricting the use of computers is necessary for children. However, children still should be allowed to use them because computers have their own advantages. ( 199 words)[/quote]
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