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    Smile with a funny waddle.

    Penguins are birds with black and white feathers and a funny waddle.



    Does the above sound good? Is it better to reword it as the following? Thanks.

    Penguins are birds with black and white feathers, waddling in a funny manner.

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    #2

    Re: with a funny waddle.

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    Penguins are birds with black and white feathers and a funny waddle.



    Does the above sound good? Is it better to reword it as the following? Thanks.

    Penguins are birds with black and white feathers, waddling in a funny manner.
    well , as you probably are well aware of, you've got the same phrase down to the last letter here.

    I'd say it all depends what audience you are aiming at.

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    #3

    Re: with a funny waddle.

    Thanks, beascarpetta.
    Got it.

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