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    Post Sentence check

    I would like to know if the following sentences are gramatically correct and understandable?

    I am looking to join a conscientious team of physicians that will help me advance towards my career goals while teaching the fundamentals in being an avid Family Practitioner yet at the same time a well experienced clinician.

    I look forward in hearing from you to discuss my educational/clinical experience and also what I can help bring to your program.

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    Re: Sentence check

    How about:

    In advancing towards my career goal of becoming an avid Family Practitioner I would like to join a team that can teach me the fundamentals and aid my growth as a well experienced clinician.
    I look forward to hearing from you very soon so that we can further explore my clinical experience and how it might be used to benefit your program.
    Last edited by oregeezer; 30-Dec-2007 at 09:20. Reason: rewording

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