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    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentence?

    When I got my apartment lobby, I found all the lifts were out of service. I had to walk up to fifteen floors to my home. It was very hard.

    thanks
    Kieth

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    Re: walk

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentence?

    When I entered my apartment lobby, I found all the lifts out of order. I had to walk up fifteen floors to my home. It was very hard.

    thanks
    Kieth
    You could say like this too: When I got into my apartment lobby I saw that all the lifts were not working. So I had to walk up to my flat on the fifteenth floor. I got really very tired.

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