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    Smile after her date had ended badly.

    Shelly decided to take a risk and walk home by herself after her date had ended badly.

    Shelly decided to take a risk of walking home by herself after her unpleasant/frustrating date.



    Which of the above two makes more sense or sounds better to you? Thanks.


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    Re: after her date had ended badly.

    The first one.

    If you change "a" to "the" in the second one, it will be as good.

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    Re: after her date had ended badly.

    Thanks, Anglika.
    Got it.

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