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    correct expressions

    Hello again

    could you please tell me which of these is correct or if there is any better phrase:

    extend the offer by new products and services
    enrich the offer by new products and services
    enhance the offer by new products and services
    add new products and services in the offer

    Thanks a lot!

    Hanka

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    Re: correct expressions

    Hello Hanka,

    I would guess that you want to suggest that an offer of some kind has been made more attractive by the addition of new products and services; in which case:

    1. extend the offer by new products and services

    not used.

    2. enrich the offer by new products and services

    you would say "enrich...with"; but again, it's not used.

    3. enhance the offer by new products and services

    "enhance...with..." might be used.

    4. add new products and services in the offer

    you would say "add...to..."; but again, it sounds a little unusual.

    Best wishes,

    MrP

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    Re: correct expressions

    Thanks a lot! And are there any other options to say this that are commonly used?

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    Re: correct expressions

    Hello Hanka,

    I'm still not quite sure what the intended context might be; but you could say e.g. that you were expanding your business with new products and services; or that you were offering new products and services to your customers.

    All the best,

    MrP

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