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    Please correct these sentences

    1. In the conversation with Mr. Wong two days ago, he is going to check the carton box quantity from your storage, but not any information until today. Could you please help to follow up? We must reply to customer before the cargo inspection date on 24 Jan

    2. As per your advised that there are 1880pcs goods cannot be repaired, we will arrange our QC to your factory for these inspection. Please ready them on January 21


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    Re: Please correct these sentence, thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    1. In the conversation with Mr. Wong two days ago, he is going to check the carton box quantity from your storage, but not any information until today. Could you please help to follow up? We must reply to customer before the cargo inspection date on 24 Jan

    2. As per your advised that there are 1880pcs goods cannot be repaired, we will arrange our QC to your factory for these inspection. Please ready them on January 21
    1. As we discussed with Mr. Wong two days ago, he was to check the number of cartons in your warehouse, but we have not yet heard from him. Could you please follow up on this? We must reply to our customer before the cargo inspection on Jan. 24.

    2. As you advised us that there are 1880 items that cannot be repaired, we will arrange for our QC to inspect them in your factory. Please have them ready on January 21.

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    Re: Please correct these sentence, thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by cclaff View Post
    1. As we discussed with Mr. Wong two days ago, he was to check the number of cartons in your warehouse, but we have not yet heard from him. Could you please follow up on this? We must reply to our customer before the cargo inspection on Jan. 24.

    2. As you advised us that there are 1880 items that cannot be repaired, we will arrange for our QC to inspect them in your factory. Please have them ready on January 21.
    Thank you for your help

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