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  1. lissi
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    Smile please give me suggestions for the sentences i have framed.

    Hi all,
    Hope everone's doing good.....Am being assigned a UK project and so i ll leaving to UK next month on ------ .Its a one year project... i wanted to share the pleasure with all of you ...
    keep in touch..have a great day.


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    Re: please give me suggestions for the sentences i have framed.

    Quote Originally Posted by lissi View Post
    Hi all,
    Hope everone's doing good.....Am being assigned a UK project and so i llleaving to UK next month on ------ .Its a one year project... i wanted to share the pleasure with all of you ...
    keep in touch..have a great day.
    Do you want it made more formal? Or merely corrected?


    I've highlighted glaring errors.

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