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    employment level??

    WHat are the proper words or expression for the following sentences?( especiallly the red parts) Also, if you see an y problems, let me have your comments.

    1. Computers have negative effects on employment level( or workplace or what else)becasue computers do a lot of things instead of human beings, many workers have lost their jobs.


    2. computers are destroying our lives in terms of health and social relationship. Too much sitting in front of computers with snacks has threatenend our health.

    3. Also, as many people rely on computers to communicate with other people, misunderstadning can happen more commonly.

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    Re: employment level??

    1. Computers have negative effects on the employment level, because computers do things people used to do. Many people have lost their jobs because of computers.
    2. Computers are destroying our lives in terms of health and social relationship. Too much sitting in front of the computer screen eating junk food is bad for your health.
    3. Also, as many people rely on computers to communicate with other people, misunderstadnings can happen more often.


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