Student or Learner
I'm trying to write an introduction speech for communication applications class. I want to know am I placing my comma in the right place.
Thesis statement: I'm here today to share with the audience, Justin Timberlake's accomplishments.
Did I place the common in the right place?
I plan on telling the audience about his accomplishments.
Thesis statement: I am here today to tell you/the audience about Jason Timberlake's accomplishments.
It is better to be simple and direct, and this way you avoid the comma problem.