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    ben9108 is offline Member
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    Put in operation

    I would be grateful if someone could help to correct my sentence.

    the monitoring system for fan was tested to the satisfaction of relevant parties and has been put in operation formally. Please IT colleagues closely monitor the system.

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    Re: Put in operation

    Quote Originally Posted by ben9108 View Post
    I would be grateful if someone could help to correct my sentence.

    the monitoring system for the fan was tested to the satisfaction of all the relevant parties and has been put into operation, formally. (Please IT) Will all IT colleagues please closely monitor the system.
    This reads better and may get the desired result!

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