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    #1

    Please check the grammar

    Hi again,

    Will someone please take a look at the following letter for any grammar mistakes?

    Thank you


    (My address)
    Apartment Number
    Area Name
    City Name
    Date
    (Recipient's address)
    The principal
    University Name
    Area Name
    City Name

    Dear Sir,

    This is to state that I have completed my intermediation in pre-engineering, and now I want to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your highly estimable university. Literally, since I was in elementary school I have been interested in telecommunication, and more recently, I have narrowed my goal to become a telecommunication engineer. It has always been my and motherís wish that I study at your university, but financially I am not strong enough to afford such a massive amount of fees.

    Thereby, I request you to assist me by giving me a concession of 50% at least.

    Meanwhile, thank you and I assure you of my sincere and continuing efforts.

    Great regards,

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    #2

    Re: Please check the grammar

    Please have a look at the letter for mistakes!

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    #3

    Re: Please check the grammar

    Anyone there?

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    #4

    Re: Please check the grammar

    at least look at the main body for grammar mistakes, please!


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    Re: Please check the grammar

    Dear Sir


    I am writing to inform you that I have now completed my intermediation in pre-engineering, and now wish to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your university.

    Since I was in elementary school I have been interested in telecommunications, and more recently, I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunication engineer.

    It has always been my and motherís wish that I study at your university, but unfortunately I am not in a sufficiently strong financial position to afford the fees without assistance. Therefore, I would like to inquire into the possibility of obtaining an assisted place. I would be most grateful if you could inform me of any such opportunities.

    Thank you for your assistance in this matter.

    Yours sincerely

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    Re: Please check the grammar

    Thank you very much indeed, Horsa. I'm very thankful to you.

    What about this also?

    Dear Sir,

    Having completed my H.S.C. in pre-engineering, I would now like to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your esteemed university. From the time I was in elementary school, I have been interested in telecommunications, and more recently, I have narrowed my goal to becoming an engineer in telecommunications.

    It has also long been my dream to study at your university, but financially I am only in a position to cover, at most, about half of the costs. Therefore, I would like to request financial assistance.

    Thank you very much for your time and assistance.

    Faithfully,

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