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    Smile to broaden the range of music

    The teacher introduced many forms of music in class to broaden the range of music his students knew about.
    ... broaden the music knowledge of his students.
    ... broaden his students' music knowledge.



    Hi,
    Do all of the above sound right to you? Thanks.


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    Re: to broaden the range of music

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    The teacher introduced many forms of music in class to broaden the range of music his students knew about.
    ... broaden the music knowledge of his students.
    ... broaden his students' music knowledge.



    Hi,
    Do all of the above sound right to you? Thanks.
    The first option is fine.
    In the second option, "musical" would be better, since it is an adjective.
    In the third one, I would say "... his students' knowledge of music."

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    Re: to broaden the range of music

    Quote Originally Posted by cclaff View Post
    The first option is fine.
    In the second option, "musical" would be better, since it is an adjective.
    In the third one, I would say "... his students' knowledge of music."
    Thanks, cclaff.

    Got it.


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