.Can you please check my letter writing.
Thanks a lot!
Thanks for replying to my mail. I'm so surprised that you replied very quickly. Glad to see that. [not the best way to say this. Try "Thanks for replying so quickly to my mail. I am grateful for your speedy response."]
Yeah, I will work very hard and if I could become one of the performers in the Australian industry, I would be very happy and appreciative.
All right. I will tell you as soon as semester one has ended. Best luck to you too for this year.
Student or Learner