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  1. Senior Member
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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread:
    Donít hang around the floor.
    Donít hang around outside the rooms.
    Donít hang around on the corridor.
    When are you going to get here?
    I have to think over which job position I should put you in.
    Thanks
    pete

  2. oregeezer's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: proofread

    1.)Don't around on this floor. (Go to another floor)
    2.)OK
    3.)Don't hang around in the corridor.
    4.)OK
    5.)OK

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