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    Hi there
    Please proofread this sentence.

    1. My friendís visit brought me a lot of warmth and good memories.
    2. Lady and gentleman, I am glad to be here to give a speech. I first welcome all the guests here and thank you for coming here.

    Thanks
    simon


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    Re: proofread

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Hi there
    Please proofread this sentence.

    1. My friendís visit brought me a lot of warmth and good memories.
    2. Ladies and gentlemen, I am glad [delighted/pleased/honoured] to be here to give a speech. May I first/I would first like to welcome all the guests and thank you for coming.

    Thanks
    simon
    I take it that you are addressing more than one woman and one man.

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