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    dakheel is offline Newbie
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    correct my sentence

    Please correct the below sentence

    Last week I traveled to Riyadh city to attend a meeting related to my job.
    The meeting scheduled to start from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. and I planed to take my lunch around 12:00 p.m. In the evening I meet my friend and spend a very nice time with him.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dakheel View Post
    Please correct the below sentence

    Last week I traveled to Riyadh city to attend a meeting related to my job.
    The meeting scheduled to start from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. and I planed to take my lunch around 12:00 p.m. In the evening I meet my friend and spend a very nice time with him.
    Last week I travelled to the city of Riyadh to attend a meeting related to my job. The meeting was scheduled to start at 9:00 AM, and to run until 11:00 AM. I planned to take my lunch around noon. In the evening, I met my friend and spent a very pleasant time with him.

    OR, the first sentence can be:

    Last week I travelled to Riyadh to attend a business meeting.

    The last sentence can also be:

    In the evening I met my friend, and we had a very pleasant time together.

    The rest remains the same.

    Hope this helps.

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