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    announcement

    Hi there,
    Could you proofread the following announcement?

    Re: Reckless Dumpling Obstacles and Caused Blockage at Drainage System and Flooding at Lower Floor Premises

    Recently, several incidents of blockage at common drainage and manhole have happened. This resulted sewage blockage to several lower floor residential units and serious flooding. During the progress of the drainage clearance works, we have found
    towels, underwear, huge amount of female sanitary towel and solid greasy substance inside the drainage system so that drainage was blocked seriously.
    The above incidents continuously occurred and caused individual owners suffering enormous damages and nuisance.
    Please remind and instruct all family members and servant do not dump any solid
    non-water-solvent substance into the water closet or other drainage facilities
    Please be considerate. Thank you for your cooperation

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    Re: announcement

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Hi there,
    Could you proofread the following announcement?

    Re: Reckless Dumpling Obstacles and Caused Blockage at Drainage System and Flooding at Lower Floor Premises

    Recently, several incidents of blockage at common drainage and manhole have happened. This resulted in sewage blockage to several lower floor residential units and serious flooding. During the progress of the drainage clearance works, we have found
    towels, underwear, huge amount of female sanitary towels and solid greasy substance inside the drainage system so that drainage was blocked seriously.
    The above mentioned were no isolated incidents and caused individual owners to suffer enormous damages and nuisance.
    Please remind and instruct all family members and servants not to dump any solid
    non-water-solvent substance into the water closet or other drainage facilities
    Please be considerate. Thank you for your cooperation
    Wait for more opinions

    saludos

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