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    think

    Hi there,
    Please proofread these sentences.

    People usually think (of / about) each other at the beginning of a romance, but when the time passes, they may argue with each other over some trivial things, which badly affect their relationships.

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    pete


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    Re: think

    "People are usually considerate of each other...."

    "...they may argue over trivial matters..."

    "which badly affects/will badly affect..."

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    #3

    Re: think

    Hi there,
    How about this?
    At the beginning of a romance, people usually miss each other and think of each other all the time so they may not be easily concentrated on their studies or work.

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    pete


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    Re: think

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    How about this?
    At the beginning of a romance, people usually miss each other and think of each other all the time so they may not be easily concentrated on their studies or work.

    Thanks
    pete
    It is grammatically ok, though I would probably have said "so they [are not concentrating/do not concentrate] on their studies or work".

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