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    • Join Date: Jan 2008
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    #1

    Need your help please!

    1. When the housing market recovered.
    2. Jenny Karing a retired history teacher now teaches English in Japan, however, the job has involved a lot of time away from family and friends that said she enjoys the adventure.
    3.Attitude is 10% what happens to us and 90% how we react to it, so we need people in our lives that will willingly help us maintain. Sometimes seem hard to find positive people.
    4.When did being in charge mean I would have to work weekends mike asked I thought all of my employees would get the lousy hours.
    5.The local newspaper praised the mayor for narrowly continuing taxes at their lowest level in ten years; however, many difficult decisions were currently taken to balance the budget.
    6.The following accounting associates were recognized for corporate achievements at the spring divisional meeting Melvin felming highest billable hours lara logan most new personal finance clients and pat Fletcher most new corporate clients.
    7.A person gets out of prison who is going to hire him the corrections officer asked we need the prison system to design company structures where they can gain some work experience the transition back to society will then be less daunting however that’s a lot to ask from the public.
    8.Apart from her professional life as an Administrative Assistant with San Diego Hospice and her duties as a Minister Nell is a devoted whale-watcher.
    9.Bella freeman an actor of diverse talents has pretended to be orphan Annie Carlos Santana and the where’s the beef lady in various screen acting Community Theater and commercial venues however she’s now ready to retire.
    10.If we get tired of the same old routine.
    11.Making the grade in college is difficult recovering from a poor GPA is even more grueling as the old saying goes you can play now and pay later or you can pay now and play later its all about balance.
    12.Accountants are perceived as experienced knowledgeable honest, law abiding and competent because of this jurors see accountants as having a moral duty to be accurate and to dig beneath the surface few jurors believe that professionals in a big accounting firm would conspire to cheat their clients.
    13.Making the most of his time at brown institute Joe studied broadcasting and worked for a major media outlet in the twin cities however he’s now returned to WITC for retraining in computer information systems.
    14.The Santana Supernatural CD includes the following songs and artists smooth featuring rob Thomas do you like the way featuring Lauryn hill and Cee-lo and wishing it was featuring eagle eye cherry.
    15.Jill blinked.
    16.Do not eat breakfast before going to the gym otherwise you will get cramps after 20 minutes on the elliptic runner. Harold advised however don’t use that as an excuse for not working out in the morning.
    17.According to booker t Washington we should measure the size of the accomplishment by the obstacles you had to overcome to reach you goals that seem like good advice.
    18.Maddie wanted to bring French silk pie to the potluck but she was worried about whether it would hold up well in the July sun that wasn’t an issue however since the event was air conditioned.
    19.Make up your own sentence using the FANBOYS rule.
    20.Make up your own sentence demonstrating one of the proper semicolon uses.t of prison. Who is going to hire him? We need the prison system to design and implement companies and manufacturing businesses where the ex-prisoner can have money coming and get to work for a couple of years so that he has a job record on his resume. At the same time, they need to have h
    I need to correct them some of them i have no idea how to do it some i did same changes but i am not s sure if you can help me to see mistakes here i will be so happy. you can d couple sentence if you can not do all thanks for sepending your valuable time for me.


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    #2

    Re: Need your help please!

    Could you first explain what this is? Some of the sentences are incomplete.


    • Join Date: Jan 2008
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    #3

    Re: Need your help please!

    Yeah thats what i am trying to figure out how to complete some of them are complete but puncuation problems is occurd so thats why i am asking help for that.


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    #4

    Re: Need your help please!

    Sorry - let us be quite clear. Is this an assignment?

    If so, we really do expect the person to make the first try.

    Start with the first ten, indicate what you think should be the punctuation and we can then advise you - otherwise we are merely doing your work for you.

    Points to remember:

    Proper names take capital letters [John Smith]

    Punctuation is followed by one space.


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    #5

    Re: Need your help please!

    [quote=gracie12;259719]1. When the housing market recovered.we were too late to buy a house.
    2. Jenny Karing a retired history teacher, now teaches English in Japan, however, the job has involved a lot of time away from family and friends, that said she enjoys the adventure.
    3.Attitude is 10% what happens to us and 90% how we react to it, so we need people in our lives that will willingly help us maintain. Sometimes seem hard to find positive people.
    4."When did being in charge mean I would have to work weekends" mike asked. I thought, all of my employees would get the lousy hours.
    5.The local newspaper praised the mayor for narrowly continuing taxes at their lowest level in ten years; however, many difficult decisions were currently taken to balance the budget.
    6.The following accounting associates were recognized for corporate achievements at the spring divisional meeting: Melvin Felming highest billable hours, Lara Logan most new personal finance clients, and pat Fletcher, most new corporate clients.
    7."A person gets out of prison who is going to hire him" the corrections officer asked. We need the prison system to design company structures. where they can gain some work experience, the transition back to society will then be less daunting, however, that’s a lot to ask from the public.
    8.Apart from her professional life as an Administrative Assistant, with San Diego Hospice and her duties as a Minister, Nell is a devoted whale-watcher.
    9.Bella freeman an actor of diverse talents has pretended to be orphan. Annie Carlos Santana and the where’s the beef lady in various screen acting Community Theater and commercial venues, however, she’s now ready to retire.
    10.If we get tired of the same old routine.we should do something different.
    11.Making the grade in college is difficult, recovering from a poor GPA is even more grueling, as the old saying goes you can play now and pay later or you can pay now and play later its all about balance.
    12.Accountants are perceived as experienced, knowledgeable, honest, law abiding and competent, because of this jurors see accountants as having a moral duty to be accurate, and to dig beneath the surface, few jurors believe that professionals in a big accounting firm would conspire to cheat their clients.
    13.Making the most of his time at brown institute, Joe studied broadcasting and worked for a major media outlet in the twin cities, however, he’s now returned to WITC for retraining in computer information systems.
    14.The Santana's Supernatural CD includes the following songs and artists smooth featuring Rob Thomas do you like the way featuring Lauryn hill and Cee-lo and wishing it was featuring eagle eye cherry?
    15.Jill blinked.when she got surprised.
    16.Do not eat breakfast before going to the gym, otherwise you will get cramps after 20 minutes on the elliptic runner. Harold advised, however, don’t use that as an excuse for not working out in the morning.
    17.According to booker, T Washington we should measure the size of the accomplishment by the obstacles, you had to overcome to reach your goals, that seem like good advice.
    18.Maddie wanted to bring French silk pie to the potluck, but she was worried about whether it would hold up well in the July sun, that wasn’t an issue, however, since the event was air conditioned.
    19.Some students can remember what was the assignment, however, others can remember only T.V guide.
    20.. This class appears to be overwhelming; nevertheless, it can be done.t of prison. Who is going to hire him? We need the prison system to design and implement companies and manufacturing businesses where the ex-prisoner can have money coming and get to work for a couple of years so that he has a job record on his resume. At the same time, they need to have h


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    #6

    Re: Need your help please!

    Angelika this sentences were more tangled up i tried to put them together i got overwhelmed and i poet it here to get some feedback, with fresh mind i looked over i did more changes i hope this tie better than before. I don't expect anyone to do it all for me if i know where did i go wrong i will fix it. if you could just tell me which part is wrong i will do it.
    Thank you for your respond.

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