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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Please correct this essay

    We need to provide 10% free spare packing with the goods into a container, but this is for new modle of 1st order only.

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    susiedqq is offline Key Member
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    Re: Please correct this essay

    We need to provide

    10% free spare packing with the goods

    Zoe - This is not clear. Do you need 10% more room for packing?

    If so, "provide" should be "allow"

    into a container.

    This applies to the new model, 1st order only.

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