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  1. #1
    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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      • Korean
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      • South Korea
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      • China
    Join Date
    Jan 2008

    IS this sentence correct?

    1. The po no. is 1234pcs for 4412pcs, and there is still have a remaining quantity of 2022 pcs, we will provide you soon
    2. Is there any update quotation after you’re visited to my colleague’s home?
    3. Is it possible to fill out your payment date to us today?
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 04-Mar-2008 at 16:40.

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Jul 2007

    Re: IS this sentence correct?

    I am afraid your sentences are not quite right and I will need an explanation of what you intended to say in sentences 1 and 3 before I can make any suggestions.

    Here is a suggestion for 2.

    2. Is there any update to the quotation following your visit to my colleague’s home?

    In your first sentence does 'pcs' mean pieces? Does 'po' have a meaning or is it just a code? Is the sentence about a partially filled order? If the answer is yes, why don't the figures add up? Has an earlier partial delivery already been made?

    In your third sentence are you asking for payment 'today' or for a date when they will pay?

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