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    #1

    Smile which one is better

    Could you tell which of the following two sentences sounds better, if any:

    1. At the beginning of 11th century (1018) after nearly half a century war the Bulgarian state surrendered to Byzantine rule.

    2. At the begginning of 11th century (1018), after a war that lasted for half a century, Bulgaria fell under Byzantine domination.


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    #2

    Re: which one is better

    Quote Originally Posted by snade17 View Post
    Could you tell which of the following two sentences sounds better, if any:

    1. At the beginning of the 11th century (1018), after nearly half a century of war, the Bulgarian state surrendered to Byzantine rule.

    2. At the beginning of the 11th century (1018), after a war that lasted for half a century, Bulgaria fell under Byzantine domination.
    Both are fine [with minor amendments]. I marginally prefer #1


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    #3

    Re: which one is better

    1. At the beginning of the 11th century (1018,) after nearly half a century of war, the Bulgarian state surrendered to Byzantine rule.

    2. At the beginning of the 11th century (1018), after a war lasting half a century, Bulgaria fell under Byzantine domination.

    Frankly, both are good, but the second is phrased more as one would find in a history book. It would be my choice.

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