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    #1

    Please correct my sentence

    Jessica has confirmed the audit schedule on last Friday, I will keep all the update status to Connie for her follow up

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    Re: Please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Jessica has confirmed the audit schedule on last Friday, I will keep all the update status to Connie for her follow up
    Your sentence is unclear.......

    Jessica has approved (?) last Friday's audit schedule. I will keep Connie informed for her to follow up.

    Did the audit schedule take place last Friday ?
    Did J confirm it last Friday ?
    Will you keep Connie updated ?

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    Re: Please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by fromatto View Post
    Your sentence is unclear.......

    Jessica has approved (?) last Friday's audit schedule. I will keep Connie informed for her to follow up.

    Did the audit schedule take place last Friday ?
    Did J confirm it last Friday ?
    Will you keep Connie updated ?
    Jessica has approved (?) last Friday's audit schedule. I will keep Connie informed for her to follow up.

    Did the audit schedule take place last Friday ? No
    Did J confirm it last Friday ? Yes
    Will you keep Connie updated ? Yes

    This is my revsion : Jessica has confirmed the audit schedule for our company last Friday. I will keep Connie posted for the update status

    Is this better ? Please comment


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    Re: Please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post

    This is my revsion : Jessica has confirmed the audit schedule for our company last Friday. I will keep Connie posted for the update status

    Is this better ? Please comment
    Last Friday Jessica confirmed the audit schedule for our company. I will keep Connie posted about the update status.

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