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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    is these ok ?

    Please find the attached photo; we would like to double confirm that is the spare parts of xxxx. Could you please clarify this for us?
    After checking with our supplier, we confirm that this is the spare parts of xxxx

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: is these ok ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please find attached a photo; we would like to double check that shows the spare parts for xxxx. Could you please clarify this for us?

    After checking with our supplier, we confirm that this [photograph] shows the spare parts for xxxx
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    puzzle is offline Senior Member
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    Re: is these ok ?

    Zoe2008is these ok ?
    Please find the attached photo;

    This sentence is grammatically wrong? Or, it's just not good? Please.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: is these ok ?

    Not actually wrong. However, it would be better phrased as "Please find an attached photograph" unless in a previous sentence the photograph has already been mentioned.

    Since the message as given seems to start with that sentence, it is better to use either my phrasing, or "a" to indicate to the recipient that there is one attached to the message.

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    puzzle is offline Senior Member
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    Re: is these ok ?

    Thank you!

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