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    Post Please correct the following sentences

    Please note note that Ms. Anita has requested us to carry out some maintenance works in her office at Patna office as early as possible.
    so, please find attached cost estimates of the scope of work including
    man hours and material cost.

    Prior to work commencement, however, she wants details, including price, of the work program.

    Also, note that there is no work required to be carried out in Mr. Sharma's Office.


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    Please note note that Ms. Anita has requested us to carry out some maintenance works in her office at Patna office as early as possible.
    so, please find attached cost estimates of the scope of work including
    man hours and material cost.

    Prior to work commencement, however, she wants details, including price, of the work program.

    Also, note that there is no work required to be carried out in Mr. Sharma's office.

    Repetition of word "note"

    "maintenance work" is the usual phrase

    "so" is not necessary

    ""the scope of" is not necessary

    "required" is not necessary

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